few things. okay so I was reading the chapter which is ABSOLUTELY amazing, and I was wondering, “wow, does this really fit my character?” and then I realized it does. kind of. i was originally planning this character to be a sarcastic characterish. the character is 100 percent a perfectionist, so it makes sense that they want everything to be perfect. it’s a little extreme in the story though. it would more be like a stark realization. and crying? makeup? she isn’t preppy, for starclan’s sake. ashlyn doesn’t like any injustice. they’re the one therian who actually believes in protesting against hate instead of just avoiding it. they definitely would not just be a sitting duck. just uh change those things a little bit. and yes they still have flaws? like they’re still a perfectionist and can get really mad if you rile them up, especially if they’re in a bad mood. right now they seem extra happy because shifting. shifting is silly. rawr. so yeah.
also clearly you don’t know the plot of hearts of the wild :pensive: (this is a part of the plot that hasn’t been written yet)
