This is a major wip!! I actually redid most of the stuff I had done previously since I didn't like it! I tried to exaggerate Dandelionkits expression, and I will be adding a scene of pyritefangs body before this, and then Lakepaw narrowing her eyes after :) If there's anything you want me to change please let me know! but I most likely will need a small extension since I have exams coming up this week and another map part that is due soon :)
Yes Im going to add her other eye + all of the markings later!!