Uhhhg the proportions look weird. Sorry, I know he doesn't look like he's jolting awake in fear; I can try to speed it up if you like. Also, is there anything you'd like me to put where nothing's happening? Should I make him fluffier? I am so confused right now. [NIGHTTIME, THUNDERCLAN CAMP; MED DEN] Jayfeather is asleep in his moss bed, when "At the edge" plays have him jolt awake in fear, eyes widening.