CONTENT WARNING: Orange juice coming out of body. —— Space, click, or arrow keys. —— Next: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/923526560/ Previous: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/916039931 First: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/843320692/ Refs: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/908205518/ —— And now she’s tracking orange juice into the healers’ den. You realize the herbs won’t work as well if they’re covered in orange juice, right? —— Cast: - ??? [she/her] (brown cat with orange eyes and many scars) - Adderpaw [they/she] (red calico cat with bright yellow eyes) - Hazepaw [she/her] (golden cat with green eyes and a blue ear) - Goldenpaw (seen) [he/him] (golden cat with blue eyes and a red paw print on his chest) - Cherrypaw (mentioned) [he/him] (light brown cat with teal eyes) - Grayrock (mentioned) [he/him] (gray cat with brown eyes and ear tufts)
In general, I like this chapter, but after completing it, I see that the tonal whiplash might be a bit harsh. I gotta stop giving into my banter instincts and let my characters have a serious conversation for once. Then again, in human years, Adderpaw and Hazepaw would probably be around early teens, so perhaps it’s not too unrealistic to have them prioritize friendly insulting each other over talking about the actual issue at hand. Plot twist, Adderpaw was Odysseus the whole time?? :0
