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His name was Carlos Ivenson he is 6'8' tall, with a lean and slender frame. He has brown eyes, and his black hair is always in a mess. He is usually dressed all in black with denim jeans. On the surface, Carlos can appear a little too cool and aloof. He can come off as having an 'attitude' and is unapproachable at times. However, after you get to know him, Carlos is kind, caring, and gentle. He is loyal to his friends and values relationships. He is also very considerate and understanding. Carlos was raised by a single mother in a large town in the U.S.A . His father had died when he was just a baby and his mother supported him by working as a waitress. Growing up in a larger community meant that he had to rely on himself to achieve his dreams. Even though he didn't have a lot of money, Carlos was very driven and worked hard to achieve his goals. Carlos dashed out the door, glancing around from side-to-side. His frizzled black hair flew in all directions as he moved, brushing up against his face. He didn’t *think* anything was there. But he still decided on his better judgement to check. The neighborhood was eerily empty. No noise, no usual bustle, no voices. Empty, cold, and quiet............... He calls out ''MOM!'' in a frightened voice. He runs back inside, checks every room, and he then runs up the stairs again for a final check, when suddenly he hears a loud bang coming from the downstairs, He immediatly runs down the stairs to see his brother.......all the way from college. ''that's weird'' he thinks to himself. He tries responding to his brother, but he dosent say anything, instead he opens his mouth and charges at him knocking him to the ground, Carlos tries to get back up but his brother is holding him to the floor by him neck, Carlos then kicks his brother away and runs, but his brother grabe's his ankle and twists it, Carlos screames in pain. With rage over coming him, he then reppeaditly punches his brother in the face untill the helmet accidently falls off, his brother then drops to the floor, ''JACOB!'' he screams, he then moves on to check his pulse, but while he is doing that he feels a sudden shock over come his head, then a screeching sound, he rips the helmet off, and it shatters. The noise stops. That was the helmet his mother had saved up for, for years the helmet was part of an earlier batch, at least the 12th. Explaining why it was screeching so loudly..........but, that still dosent explain his brother's death, ''maybe I punched him too hard'' he thinks to himself ''no that can't be it it can't be it... ....he then continues repeating that to himself, all the way upstairs. Untill he sees a note covering his t.v it said ''Good morning Carlos honey! I'm going out to the store real quick, and I'll be back soon, (and don't use this as an excuse to skip school) love mom'' Carlos's eyes fill with tears but none come out. He then runs outside to the store.................TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 2. <go down> go down go down a bit further almost there additional help provided by my awesome, wonderful, amazing, great, favorite cousin: CatRecuersIRL