Touch any part of the text or circle to turn pages. Originally it was going to be a lot longer
Most of these are minor spelling mistakes n little grammatical/punctuational things, you don't need to add any of these edits if they don't fit. I included the original in the sprite. I may have also removed some needed context, so lmk in that case. I'm assuming based on how some of this was shortened, this lost some of the needed context for a coherent paragraph. Maybe try looking it over for strange transitions and such. Otherwise this is awesome! The suggestions are fantastic and the draft itself is really good. Thank you for letting us look it over :D
