Yes the design critiques will be WAY shorter than the art ones because they're easier :') Also uh yeah I erased the bio/description stuff so I had room to put the various 'redesigns' Cool oc though, just remember we gotta make it obvious that she's a ghost and not just a magic cat :) If you feel like critiquing my critique (or if you have any comments/questions) feel free to tell me! :D ...Yeah.
art/character- StarryNightoftheSky Demented scribbling- me