Heyo! I’m CAT ❤️! I’m making a story and I need input so I can improve it! Any input that you give me, I will appreciate very much! Thank you! (Yay constructive criticism!! XD) The whole story is about a girl named Quinn, who has anxiety and depression. She just moved to TN, and she met a friend named Freedom. Together, they try to get rid of Quinn’s A & D. (you will know what the letters mean once you read the first chapter) **this version has be edited and reshared** Oki so uh, here it is, lemme know what you think please! ——— Prologue Freedom saw the moving vans outside from the 3ed floor of the apartment complex which was her home. She had always lived here with her mom, dad and older brother. Everything was normal. It usually felt normal. It had felt normal when the people in the next apartment complex over to the right of hers moved out, freeing up space for the next person. Then a new one moved in. that family moved out so a new family moved in. It had happened multiple times. So why does this time feel different? There was a feeling in the air. Something—or someone was coming. A white car pulled up and parked next to the moving vans. They must be the ones moving in Freedom thought. A tall woman got out of the drivers seat, she had white jeans to match her white shirt, light orange high heels, and a orange short-sleeved cropped hoodie. Her hair was dark brown and tied up in a neat bun. Her skin was tanned. Freedom opened her window to hear the woman, and a light breeze came in, messing up her carefully placed pages of homework. The woman went around the car to the back of the passenger’s side and opened the door. “Come on Quinn, get out. Don’t you want to see your new room? I asked the landlord and he said you could paint it whatever color you wanted.” The woman’s voice sounded like she was trying to be kind, but like she also didn’t have time for this. A girl, Quinn, Freedom guessed, got out of car. Her hair was brown and had been left down. she wore a oversized black hoodie, dark blue jeans, and black high tops. Her hands were in the pockets of her hoodie. She didn’t look happy. ——— Chapter 1 Quinn opened the door to her new room. Her bed, was in the corner, and boxes were everywhere. They were in the middle of moving to Nashville Tennessee. Mom had said that this place was where most country singers had started out. (She was in love with the country singer Dolly Parton and often listened to her music whenever she could) Quinn looked around at her new room for a moment, put down the last box for it, and flopped down on the mattress that was currently her bed. She could tell someone was creeping up on her. “A, D, I know you’re there. come out,” said Quinn. A and D were from Quinn’s imagination, They were kind of like imaginary friends, but different. A stood for anxiety, and D for depression. She also had her “buddy” S, for sadness, and H for happiness. H sadly didn’t get to see her often. Quinn often imagined that all of her “friends”, who were mostly her feelings, had bodies and brains and stuff like that. {**this part of the story has been cut due to recent [somewhat?] requests**} They all often follow Quinn around, but some are more distant and sometimes disappear when she’s not feeling that feeling. VV continues VV
Chapter 2: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/874590544 Emotions related: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/868799270 ^^ continued from ^^ A, a big blob of blackness, with white eyes and mouth, and D, also a big blob of blackness with white eyes and mouth, but was more human-shaped, came out of their hiding spots from under the boxes. “Quinn. There you are. We missed you,” said D. “Hi,” Quinn answered unhappily. “Looks like we’re staying for a while! What if there’s a whole spider nest under the bed and monsters in the closet?!” said A. Quinn looked under the bed and found dust. She got up and looked in the closet and found more boxes. “Liar,” she said. “What if they’re all hiding from you?!” Wondered A. “What if they come in your sleep to get you?!” Even though it was her own thought and knew there was nothing, she was still scared. Quinn looked around nervously, and found something out of its box. “What’s this?” She said mostly to herself, as she picked up a comic book entitled, “Sunshine the H.O.U. Master of the universe”. She flipped through the book real quick, and disgusted, threw it down. “Not a good book? Or do you love us too much?” Asked A. Quinn looked up and out the only window in her room, obviously frustrated. She could see another apartment complex with a window facing her’s, and in the window, a girl about her age, staring at her. The girl had straight, long, blonde hair, tied up in a ponytail, and was wearing a blue hoodie. When she noticed that Quinn was looking at her, she stopped staring and smiled at her kindly. Quinn wished she had her curtains up so she could close them on the girl, but everything was packed away. She had lots to do, and didn’t want to be stared or smiled at while she was doing it. Quinn narrowed her eyes at the girl, and walked away from the window, out of her sight. “What if she hates you?! What if she bullies you in school tomorrow?!What if she thinks that you are terrible looking and better off dead?! What if she throws you in the dumpster tomorrow because you’re trash?!” A said, but continued rambling on, “What if she’s just going to be nice and then throw you away like you never existed?! What if no one will help you?! What if everyone is mean to you tomorrow?! What if you’re nothing?! A nobody!” Said A. Quinn flopped on her mattress bed, covered her face in her hands and cried. A was right. She was a nobody and everyone would be mean and she wished that she could go back to her old school. Sure, the kids avoided her there because they thought she was weird and didn’t talk, but at least she knew where everything was and how people would react. “You are a worthless piece of crud,” said D. “I am a worthless piece of crud,” Quinn repeated. ——— Thank you all for your comments, and whatever else! I will try my best to answer any questions you have! Hope you have a good day/night! CAT ❤️ out! music is: Faded by Alen Walker
