Sorry definantly not 200 words, because I don't really care. Which sample is better? 1) The smell of pines, and books. The dark night sky over the glass dome. The faint crackle of the fire. The purring cat on my lap. The soft flickering light of the candles. But most of all, her smile. Self-evaluation and comments: I got really caried away, but it felt so good to write this. I am lesbian too so.... Yeah, I guess this isn't so good, but still.
2) In a perfect world, we would have perfect, kind, understanding teachers. In a perfect world, we would have classrooms stacked with books. In a perfect world, we would have big windows and beautiful sunny days. In a perfect world, we would be allowed to stop whatever we were doing and start writing on inspiration. In my perfect world. Self-evaluation and comments: Turns out I really like to write using repetition, but I just really had to do this. I probably need to add more, or change the order, but.....
