1. flying kicks do not work like that. *when making a movement, be as realistic as possible by using dynamic poses. otherwise, use images of [action] as reference* 2. dont just stick arms like that some one can just grab him *try to think/visualize of what would happen if the foe had realistic lightning fast reaction and realistic super strength. foe would probably do into a "ippon seoi nage" aka judo one-arm shoulde throw) heck even act it out if you cant find the best reference* 3. make portal cooler. purple blob is weird *make it it better by making a purple blob that closes in on itself like a black hole and then suddenly expand to make a portal 4. why did black just stand there. *add recoil. when stopping a force you have to recoil. e.g when punching you move your arm back then punch. when jumping you squat/get ready to jump and then you jump. you dont just make the character go up suddenly. where does the kinetic energy come from?* 5. blue's head suddenly turn to right some how. *again, where does the kinetic energy come from* 6. so black's body just stays still somehow. *black should move back a bit and move his left furthest leg to absorb the impact. its not like blue is weak enough to even push black*
Legend: *[important stuff]* #.constructive criticism btw keep this tips in mind when doing future projects
