hi everyone! I decided to go with an evil Jayfeather AU MAP! just ask to get a part, but an animation example would be nice. now fer deh rulz ---------------------------RuLz-------------------------------- 1: follow the refs and script! if not exactly, you can just simplify the refs or modify the script. 2: Jayfeather was trained by mostly Mapleshade. Tigerstar and Hawkfrost tried, but it was Mapleshade he truly related to 3: Mapleshade is singing. 4: the part not listed as available (the outro) is being animated by me, although I won't be posting it for a bit 5: everyone can be accepted! but uh. experience is fun. 6: if you don't get a part, or the part you want most is unavailable, please do not pull a "jerky Bumblestripe." 7: wow this is getting too long 8: the end 9: I said the end 10: ohhh there was a button I had to press- 11: OK THE END FR NOW- 12: oh btw have fun 13: oh btw be kind 14: oh btw if you can't lip-sync, I would suggest a TNE, since the main components of this MAP are Maple singing, but parts 5 and 6 aren't lip-sync parts 15: probs the most important and longest- you all have a week to make your parts. I originally didn't plan to have a deadline, so you now have a week to finish them. if you post a WIP you have an up to two week extension. I would like to see the parts a bit faster, and if you forget/forgot to post, thats totally fine. WIPs and collabs are totally supported. if you're under stress because the deadline is too short, you can ask for extension. 16: I deleted the thumbnail, please help. parts: 1 @singingwolf2013 2 @ANNBUNNY 3 4 5 6 7 8 @animal_things (me) 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 TNEs: - @SunnyHasSonny - - -
my AU: Jaypaw wasn't happy with his deal. one night, he snuck out to the moonpool. Tigerstar and Hawkfrost appeared in front of him, but before they got the chance to talk, Jaypaw was ushered away by Spottedleaf. he sighed as he was sent back to the waking world... the one poor Jaypaw despised. the one he was blind in. Mapleshade watched him go, she watched him struggle in the real world for days. one night, she struck. she reached him. Jaypaw related to Mapleshade, and eagerly agreed to train with her. he trained up, as he was able to see in the Dark Forest, and StarClan was unable to reach him. then, he was told to battle his clanmates, friends, siblings, during The Great Battle. but he refused. Mapleshade told him to go on, and pit him against Lionblaze. Jayfeather strongly refused to fight, but Mapleshade ushered him on, ultimately making him accidentally kill his own brother. Hollyleaf looked on in horror as Mapleshade congratulated him. Jayfeather turned around, and with one swift swipe, he cut open her neck. "I'll return..." she growled as she faded into nothing. he turned to Hollyleaf. script!! intro: Open Up Your Eyes, hosted by animal_things (you can do anything you want.) part 1: Mapleshade lip syncs "it's time you learned a lesson" (can this be a headshot? that would be fun) part 2: Jaypaw looks up at his evil mentor as she sings "its time that you understand" part 3: Mapleshade snarls as she sings "don't ever count on anybody else." part 4: Mapleshade looks out at the cats fighting, singing "in this or any other land" part 5: flashback to young Mapleshade part 6: young Maple sees Appledusk (design can be anything you want, since he's only in this part) part 7: Maple shakes the thought out of her head snarling "childish wishes" part 8: (this is what I'm gonna do lol) Jay looks up at Maple as she sings, and he flattens his ears when she says "blind" part 9: Maple rises to her paws, roaring the words part 10: Maple looks at Jay, and she shows him the shadowy, blood-bathed forest (Jay stands up? maybe?) part 11: Maple proudly lip-syncs "me among the mighty" part 12: Jay sits down and looks at the terrain, smiling to himself part 13: Jay looks around, getting used to the place. Maple sits down next to him. part 14: Maple lip-syncs, half talking to herself, half talking to StarClan part 15: Maple looks at Jay, telling him this like a fact part 16: Maple smiles as she side-eyes the battle grounds in front of them part 17: Maple gets up, smiling. part 18: Maple sings these lyrics looking at Jaypaw, who then gets up part 19: Jay headshot the end im so sorry. these parts are so short they're gonna get stuck in ur head immediately. I listened to part 19 like 3 times and my head hurts.
