im sorry it looked a little funky so i remade it hh but here are some tips 1. NEVER shade every part of the head, only the part where the bangs are showing 2. dont do the :3 mouth, its ugly af.. 3.for the love of god DO NOT DRAW THE MELONS THE SAME AS YOU DRAW BRACKETS IT MAKES ME WANNA SCREAM AAAAAA 4. SATURATE THE GOD DANG COLOURS AAA 5. dont so the blush so vibrant, it looks like they're having an allergic reaction hhh 6. add FREAKING EARS