I think i did more then two paragraphs. I just wanted to finish the story. I tried ========================================== Ariel had moved to a new house when she was very young. She was upset and scared that she had to leave her old house, even though it wasn't with the best. "No! I I'm fine with this house! I want to stay!" She cried. "Ariel, we need to move. Your father got a new job and this is the only available house near it." Her mom told her. She thought this was going to be a small house. But it wasn't. Ariel and her parents had moved into a mansion. Ariel hated it. A few nights passed until she finally calmed down and accepted it. But she still was afraid of it at night. A few years later, Ariel had to wake up to drink some water. She had a dog who always followed her because he loved her so much. But, that night the dog ran into Ariel's room the instant she opened the door. "Doggy? What's wrong?" She asked. He only whimpered in response. Then he looked above her head. He backed up into her room and pushed the door closed. Ariel banged on the door, trying to push it open. Then, stopping to turn around and look at what he was so afraid of, she screamed. The next morning, her parents went to her room to check up on her, but only found a few scratches. And their dog hiding in the corner of Ariel's room. "Our daughter went missing last night!" The mom said. "The only thing there is are scratches!" The police officer said, "Who's your daughter?" "Ariel." The dad said, trying to comforting the panicking mother. A few days later the police officer came back. "We searched her up in the files to find out what she looks like. But, the records say she's never been here before."