Press space to move through the slides There was a reason Deather got 10% -she was too edgy -abusive family is mentioned once then it seems to disappear -random war from the middle of nowhere -never explains how she learned who eether was Why Drea got 50% -yes she had edge but it was still an interesting story -It explains how she knew who Eether was -not all her traits were addressed What I don't recommend -recolors -mary sues -plain characters (IE: people trying to hard NOT to be edgy) -overly edgy (Key word: OVERLY)
