i decided to switch Mistystar and Mosskit! In this version of the story, Mistykit died in the snow instead of Mosskit. Mosskit go's to Riverclan with her brother, Stonekit. Their apprenticeship is normal. Mosskit becomes Mosspatch. at the battle at Sunningrocks, she saves her father from Redtail. (who is still killed by Tigerclaw sadly) Her father then tells the truth to her and Stonefur. she then leaves to be a loner. named Moss. Many moons later, Stonefur, now Stonestar, comes to her telling her what is happening (everything else is still basically the same) she comes back and sadly,Stonestar 's deputy dies to Tigerstar deadly wrath. the med cat gets a sign from Mistykit the Mosspatch should be the next deputy. and so she becomes deputy. they defeat Tigerstar, but Stonestar dies a couple moons after the clans come to the lake, and Mosspatch becomes Mossstar. Mistykit, Bluestar and Oakheart give her a few of her lives. and the rest is history....
Sapphire_Moth for the MAP Erin Hunter for the characters Me for the art and story
