TADA Its like 90% finished but I just wanted to release it Press o to read the original. (I reccomend reading the revised edition though, as its a lot less confusing) Next: [ https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/635729925/ ] Prev:[ https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/612092069/ ] First:[ https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/608258850/ ]
LIK AND SUBSCRIB Revised edition Changes: Panel 5: Changed 'Dash!!!' colour and added dialog arrow, while moving the characters text closer Panel 8: Changed dialog Panel 9: Changed dialog Panel 12: Changed dialog. Panel 17: Changed dialog Panel 18: Coloured in the old seals beard. Panel 19: Added text to make it more obvious that its not just a random cutaway. Panel 20: Changed the text under mistpack from Assassins to 'The stealthy ones'. Added an 's' on the end of icepacks 'The stupid one' and added the worldbuilding moment text Panel 21: Added text under Ridgepack and moved the hole religion text down to the bottom of the page. Also added the worldbuilding moment text Panel 22: I removed panel 22 as it was unnecessary and now untrue Added panel 22 Added panel 23 Added panel 24 Added panel 25 Added panel 26 Added panel 27 Added panel 28 Panel 29: Changed dialog Panel 32: Changed dialog Panel 34: Added a box around bobs text Panel 35: Added a character introduction for Thonk Panel 38: Added Dialog Panel 40: Changed dialog Panel 42: Made the white seal bob and added dialog for him. Panel 43: Added some characters on the rock so you can tell where the meteorite is falling onto. Panel 45: Made the smile a little bit more creepy and added dialog Removed worldbuilding to put in chapter 1. #fluf #comic #seal
