M: "Okay everyone! Let's share our poems we wrote!" oh, i completely forgot about the poems. i think i did well though. i was most confterable sharing with sayori first, as i knew her the best out of all the other girls. S: "Hey, this is really good!" B: "...Huh?-" S: "You're a really good writer, Bluue" B: "Don't overreact so loudly, everyone else is gonna hear you and raise their expectations. S: "I'm not overreacting though! This is really good!" B: "Thanks, I guess." B: "Hey, my turn." i took the mildly crumpled piece of paper B: "Sayori. Just a guess, but... Did you wait until this morning to write your poem?" S: "What? Uh, just a little bit!" B: "you cant say "a little bit" to a yes or no question" S: "i forgot to do it last night" B: "That explains the last poem... Including that last line." S: "I made eggs and toast!" B: "You were late to school." S: "It's bad to skip breakfast! I get all cranky..." B: "I've never seen you skip breakfast, so I guess I can't argue." S: "But next time, I wont forget! I'll write the best poem ever!" B: "Sure, I'm looking forward to it." notice how im speaking with capitalization and punctuation? i got in trouble in on of my classes for not speaking with grammar. its gonna be hard to get used to but its fine anyways, i showed my poem to yuri next, because i knew her the second most. Y: "..." B: "..." a minute passed, and its been more than enough time to read the poem. Y: "..." B: "Hello...?" Y: "Ah! I'm so sorry... I forgot to speak!" B: It's fine, it's fine..." Y: "..." Y: "Okay, this is you're first time writing a poem, correct?" B: "Yeah." Y: "Okay. I guessed so after reading through it." B: "Yep. I guessed it would be that bad." Y: "Huh? No! ...Did I just raise my voice...? I-I'm so sorry, I-" B: "Hey- relax, it's fine. I didn't notice. Y: "..." Y: "Okay, here's how I knew." After that, she just went on and on about writing skills or techniques or somethings like that. All her stuttering completely vanished and she sounds like a professional. I can't wait to forget all of this in 2 hours. Oh wait. B: "Hey, mind if I read your poem now?" Y: "Ah, I guess it's my turn. Go ahead." ... uh... i can't read this what does this word say? Y: "Sorry, m-my handwriting is so bad..." B: "Huh??" Y: "It- it took you a long time to read..." sure, it took me a long time to read, thats because i cant read fancy cursive and stuff like that!!!! B: "Oh, it's just I don't read a lot... I might be slower than you, I hope you don't mind." B: "You're handwriting is so pretty! I wish I could write as good as you. The poem is really descriptive, and I can see characters and everything just by reading it." Y: "You really think so? That's a relief..." Y: "I'm really glad you liked it." i think the poem was ghost themed, so i asked a question that was related B: "Do you like ghost stories?" Y: "Actually, the story isn't about a ghost at all." B: "Oh, that's interesting. More of a symbolic thing?" Y: "I guess you could say that." monika's next i guess. then i GUESS i'll have to pick natsuki M: "Hi Bluue! Having a good time!" B: "yea" M: "That's great to hear! Also, if you ever have any suggestions for the club, don't be afraid to ask! I'm always listening!" B: "k" M: "Oh, do you want to share you're poem?" B: "No, but I guess I have to." M: "Hehe! We're all a little embarrassed when doing these things, but its something we can go over!" so then she reads my poem M: "Oh, I really like this one! It feels like something Sayori would like." B: "Really?" M: "Yeah! Also just reading this makes me hear music! Like this is lyrics to a song or something." B: "I guess you could say that." B: "But, how is it something Sayroi would like?" M: "Well, Sayori's writing has kind of a gentle feel to it. I can tell that she likes exploring with emotions, like happiness and sadness. Who knew that someone so happy would enjoy sad things, too?" B: "Hm, yeah. That's totally unexpected." M: "Well, you should never you shouldn't be afraid to experiment a little bit, either." B: "Well, I'm sure I'll end up trying things a lot." M: "That's okay! It's how you find you're type of style." M: "And plus that's just how learning most things are! Including literature and poems!" M: "Practice makes perfect, Y'know?" B: "yeah" M: "Anyways! Want to read my poem? Don't worry, I'm not very good either..." B: "sure" uhhhhh yeah i dont know what any of this means. i'll just avoid questions and hope for the best M: "So...what do you think?" B: "Uh..." B: "Sorry, I'm not really the best person to ask for feedback..."
description too long lol M: "Ahaha. It's okay. Yeah, that kind of style has gotten pretty popular nowadays. That is, a lot of poems have been putting emphasis on the timing between words and lines." M: "When performed out loud, it can be really powerful." B: "What was the inspiration behind this one?" M: "Ah... Well, I'm not sure if I know how to put it..." M: "I guess you could say that I had some kind of epiphany recently." B: "Epiphany?" i have no idea what that word means, yet if feels important M:"Yeah...something like that. I'm kind of nervous to talk about deep stuff like that, because it's kind of coming on strongly... Maybe after everyone is better friends with each other." M: "Anyway... Here's Monika's Writing Tip of the Day!" M: "Sometimes when you're writing a poem - or a story - your brain gets too fixated on a specific point... If you try so hard to make it perfect, then you'll never make any progress. Just force yourself to get something down on the paper, and tidy it up later!" M: "Another way to think about it is this: If you keep your pen in the same spot for too long, you'll just get a big dark puddle of ink." M: "So just move your hand, and go with the flow!" M: "...That's my advice for today! Thanks for listening~" guess there's one more person... N: "..." B: "..." N: "...Well, it's about what I expected from someone like you." B: "And what's that supposed to mean?" N: "It sucks." B: "what the hell?" B: "I bet yours isn't any better. Give me that!" i feel bad for almost laughing. i tried to hold it, but that didnt make it any better. N: "I told you that you weren't gonna like it." B: "Well, you were right. Nice job." N: "Shut up! Next time we do this, I'm gonna write the best poem you've ever read, you'll see! B: "Sure." jeez, thank god thats over. i wouldve gone back to sleep, but sayori probably wouldve woken me up again. as soon as i try to read the book yuri gave me foe the second time, i hear yuri and natsuki. N: "Oh? I didn't realize you were so invested in trying to impress our new member, Yuri." eh?
