Sorry, I had a problem with the timing, so it might be very off-timing. Although I absolutely am following the script, I rewrote my part so it would be more detailed. It is otherwise the same. Leafpool touches her nose to Hollypaw’s, so she is now Holly’s mentor, but she glances over at Jaypaw, who is sitting at the other end of camp. I’ve never used this watermark, but a came up with it a while ago..
This is a WIP, just decided to post so @-FlickeringCandle- could see my progress. Um the timing keeps changing, please tell me if it is too fast or slow because I can’t tell :( I’m done!!
