Hi! So I'll just jump right in! Here it is! ( so far!) : Ravenkit woke to the weight of her brother as he pounced on her back. She let out a hiss of annoyance “Get off, mouse-brain!” Tinykit drew back, his red pelt flashed in the new-leaf sunshine. Behind him was Fiercekit their brother moved closer to Lillytail the mother of the kits. “Fiercekit! Help!” Ravenkit mewed. But Fiercekit just cowered next to his mother. Ravenkit rolled her eyes and leapt up knocking Tinykit off, swatting at his nose, “OUCH!” Tinykit yelped, Lillytail sighed and meowed “Now kits, your apprentice ceremonies are today and you have to be more mature or else Honeystar won’t make you apprentices!” Fiercekit frowned then said “It’s scary out there. I wanna stay here where it’s safe and cozy.” Tinykit gave him a pitying look but Lillytail comforted him “ You will be fine as long as you're good!” Ravenkit padded out into the clearing picking out a sparrow from the fresh-kill pile. She sat down on a rock and stared across the clearing. One day I will be a clan leader I am sure of it! Then Honeystar’s yowl rang out across the camp “Gather beneath the tall stump for the clan meeting!” Ravenkit perked her ears up and dashed to the tall stump, her small tail fluff quivering in anticipation “ Today we are making three new apprentices, Ravenkit please step forward!” Ravenkit confidently padded toward her clan leader “ Are you ready to become an apprentice?” “Yes!” ************** Ravenpaw bounced around her mentor, Crowheart “Are we hunting? Fighting? Planning attack? Starting a war?” Crowheart purred in aMEWsmunt ``Well… I am not sure about a war but RiverClan has been moving its borders up and we need to stop them. Honeystar thinks you're ready for your first battle and your 3rd gathering.” Ravenpaw wiggled her haunches in excitement “ The RiverClan cats will pay! No one takes from ShadowClan!” Honeystar walked up to them “Are you ready?” Raintail and Sharppaw along with her brother Tinypaw and his mentor Fiercepaw tailed behind with Snowheart the medicine cat, Tinypaw glared at him he was still mad Fiercepaw decided to become a medicine cat, he thought that he only decided to do that because he was cowardly but Fiercepaw just flicked his tail in annoyance and said “I’ll treat any wound that’s hurt!” “ Yeah, like that’ll help us much.” Tinypaw hissed “You know very well medicine cats have saved countless lives from battles.” Mosstail scolded her apprentice “ Show some respect!” Tinypaw ducked his head but didn't say sorry. Sharppaw rolled his eyes and said “ If you're done fighting each other instead of the enemy can we go?” they both nodded and Honeystar meowed “ Silkwhisker will go instead of me I am expecting Blazefoot’s kits and I need to keep them safe.” They nodded and Silkwhisker, the deputy, walked towards them “Let’s go!” he said. They headed out of camp and walked toward the new riverclan border once they arrived Silkwhisker told them to hide and sneak up on the patrol. Ravenpaw hid within the shadows of a pine tree. Sure enough a patrol arrived and 1 cat caught her eye. She had seen him at gatherings before. He was a handsome black and orange tom with amber eyes. His name was Sprucepaw and Ravenpaw had hoped she wouldn't have to fight him but she still bunched up her haunches and waited for Silkwhisker’s signal. He waved his tail as the sign and before the RiverClan cats could think they pounced.|OH NO i just realized it says leafPOO! ;p
Chapter 2 : Chapter 2 Ravenpaw leaped at Berrytail and dug her claws into her flesh; she screeched out in agony and threw her off. Ravenpaw ducked under her belly and leaped on her back, snarling but soon she lost her balance because of her loss of tail and fell over. Berrytail stood over her baring her teeth and Ravenpaw went limp. Berrytail stopped and loosed her grip but then Ravenpaw shot up and slashed at Berrytail’s chest, satisfied when she felt fur rip away. Berrytail fled and Ravenpaw turned to face Leafmaple wrestling with Sharppaw and Tinypaw. Leafmaple swung his head and shook off Sharppaw and he dropped to the ground. Ravenpaw pounced toward Leafmaple pushing hard up against him and knocked him over slashing him across the cheek. He growled and slashed across her belly. Ravenpaw stung all over and she let out a yowl of anguish. Then she bit onto his shoulder and tore some flesh off his shoulder. He turned tail and ran but Ravenpaw bit down on his tail first. Sharppaw ran over to her and asked her “ Are you okay?” “ WATCH OUT!” she responded as a riverclan she cat ran towards them, he whirled around just in time to stop himself from falling over to the force of the she-cat. Ravenpaw immediately attached herself to the she-cats back hissing in her ear and churning at her back with hind legs while sharppaw churned her stomach with his hind feet. Then she cat waild in agony and shook ravenpaw off. She ran back towards the RiverClan border. Ravenpaw was stinging all over in pain. But a gray she-cat ran towards her, swiping at her forehead, blinding her with blood. She felt water seeping into her neck. It was raining. She blindly lashed out but she just barely scratched the cat. The leaves on the ground were slippery and she felt herself lose cocsusnus and fall onto the forest floor. sorry if its 2 scary just tell me and i'll take it off.
