please critque these 6/5 <3 sorry if you dont want to do two haha, if you only want to do one then just the first one is fine ^^ ((the orange and grey one is a much older piece of art)) yes ive left scratch but i need my art to improve and i love getting critiques IF I GET DEFENSIVE I SWEAR IM NOT MEANING TO BE DEFENSIVE ITS MY WAY OF PROCESSING THE CRITIQUE AND IT COMES OFF AS DEFENSIVE SOMETIMES pleasepleaseplease be brutally honest lol irdc i cant improve if you dont
