Hi there. Look at that, I don't only make more characters for my RP! Ahah-- Anyway, here are three little short writing samples because I want someone to critique them. Please. Asking for a friend. There's Queen Wiccan and Quinn... who are gay for each other. For some background, Quinn is an assassin sent on a mission to kill Queen Wiccan as she is a lycanthrope (but Wiccan doesn't know anyone else knows about her curse). Her kingdom doesn't know this, and she will be dethroned and killed, whether her subjects find out, or Quinn gets her. Quinn is executing her mission when a group of people catches her, so to save herself she lets it slid, but then, Quinn and Wiccan kindle a romance~ So, that's the background for them. The Glass of Water Exercise was a school project lol. I liked how it turned out for the most part though, and it was a nice, short thing to break up the other short stories, which are a bit longer. Nobody asked, but my favorite part is the mention of inanimate mockery, haha. Lament of Sterling is a TLB short story I was writing for myself. It's a bit of Region 4 history, but this is just the prologue, where I describe Region 4 in all its glory. It was super fun to write this prologue! Also, RIP the "bong-bong" part, I was too lazy to go into another website and make the onomatopoeia italics. :clown face: I wanted to add a few more in here, but they were too graphic-- Either it was too gory for Scratch, or it was about SH.
