Previous: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/534935487 Next: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/543796474 First: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/508010578 Space, right arrow, or tap for next Left arrow to go back Characters in this chapter: -Hawkpaw (main protagonist) -Oakpaw (Hawkpaw's sister) -Poisonfang (Hawkpaw's mentor) -Mossystar (Shadowclan's leader) -Pinepaw (gray tom) -Nutpaw (brown demi-boy/demi-tom with a darker brown stripe) -Mintpaw (orange and white she-cat) -Softpaw (Mintpaw's sibling) -Mallowstar (Riverclan's leader) -Puddlestar (Thunderclan's leader) -Emberscorch (ginger tom) -Troutfin (blue-gray tom) -Hillstar (Skyclan's leader) -Midgestar (Windclan's leader)
So, I've decided to work on two more chapters and then probably just continue as I add to story and change things. I changed Mallowstar's design a little to make it easier to draw. Also, I just realized how similar Midgestar's design is to Dawnwatcher's. They are not related, so please don't ask if they are. I originally didn't want to do this, but I've decided to introduce characters from outside of Shadowclan. I'm not entirely what I'm going to do with Mintpaw and Softpaw, but I've got a few ideas. And Nutpaw's pretty relevant. He's got some... important connections, shall we say Nutpaw is a demi-boy Mintpaw is female Softpaw is genderfluid Mallowstar is male Midgestar is female Puddlestar is trans male Hillstar is female Okay, so I think that on that semi-vent project, I kind of made everything seem a bit more complicated than it probably should be. I'm mostly just going to be following @EletaTheNinja and @MeadowFoot_ToPH's advice from the comments of that project. Eleta's advice was to have Nutpaw be referred to by both he and they pronouns (which I already knew to do that. It's Softpaw I might have a bit of trouble with. Idk if I should just fluctuate between which pronouns are used, or if I should use one set of pronouns at one point and then another set at another point) Meadowfoot's advice was to draw gender-neutral characters similarly to how Ranboo does - with their top eyelid a bit thicker than usual characters' eyelids (which you can see on Lostriver in Chapter 63, as well as on Mintstar in Ranboo's ToPH Pride Month art).
