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SISIDE_yishujia•Created April 11, 2021
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Constructive criticism 1. Rough sketch. Making a circle and then roughly sketching the jawline. 2. Lineart keeping the top of the head. 3. Facial details. I tried keeping your style in here. You want to try and keep the mouth underneath the nose instead of straying to the sides. 4. I noticed the hair on the right side was looking a little limp so I added more volume to it. Another tip concerning hair, when drawing cartoonist style, try not to make an obvious split in the hair showing the scalp. You should try keeping the part narrower. 5. I shifted the face down a bit so it fit the head better. 6. Then I outlined in color the drawing. 7. Bucket filled. 8. For shading I usually make another layer and select a black color and color in the spots as shown. 9. Then I turn the opacity down to 30% and blur it kinda. 10. More shading but my blending tool sucks. I also added the bottom lip because it helps meshade; I stuck a triangular shadow underneath the bottom lip. 11. For the eyes I turned on alpha lock(I gave every color a different layer) and selected black, colored the top, and then blended. 12. More shading using the airbrush 13. Moved the eyes a little farther apart. This probably wasn't very helpful....

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Art by me @yishujia Character by @Thatkidoverthere2 App used Autodesk Sketchbook

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Project ID514072531
CreatedApril 11, 2021
Last ModifiedApril 12, 2021
SharedApril 11, 2021
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