This is the backstory for a game I am going to make, please tell me what you think of it and tell me what to fix and how to fix it, this is my first thing like this. Wow, good job scrolling this far, you're amazing. :)
Ummm.... the text scrolling was backpacked from... I think a game called Virus? I'm not that sure, so sorry! Here's a secret: don't tell anyone, but the game's name will be Elspeth's journey, comment "secret name found" if you found this, but don't comment the name of the game! I'm hoping to make it a lot of games. For this, I mean.
