“What’s that sound?!” I asked teetering over the edge, I pulled my foot forward and pushed my head farther, crunch. Crack. I looked around and in a moment the rock beneath me broke and sent me falling “Smoke!!!!” I yelled to my sister, she reached over the edge and grabbed my tail, then she somehow flipped, and now her paw was hanging of the rocks “Emerald! Ash!” I yelled, and soon two more sleepy cats were hanging off the cliff “oh you stupid little…” I cut Smoke off with a scream, my tail had become bloody, with Smokes claws deep inside of it “let go! let go!!! let go!!!!!!!!!!!” I yelled, tears in my eyes, “no!” she said more loud than I expected, then I noticed she wasn’t talking to me but, she was to Ash, who yelled “my ear hurts…” and in a moment she felt it, with one of her last hanging paws too, we all thought we would fall from that but I guess not, until she pulled her paw to her face, and when she saw blood she screamed. And fell. We all fell with her. THUD! We hit the ground, I was still alive and so where the others, we thought. “Where are we?!” I asked, before noticing that we had fell into a dark hole. Underground. “one two…” Emerald counted, “three…” she said pointing at herself, “wait! No. No. No. No. No! where’s Ash!?” she screamed “ASH!!!!!!!” soon we were searching, it took hours to find her, but when we did, everything fell apart.
I have wrote more, but I'll only post it after a while! Ehhhhhhhh this is BAD