Design: I like it! The Protogen have nice designs :P although they aren't my favorite open species Personality: It's okay, but adding a bit more is nice :) Powers: They seem to make sense Weaknesses: They make sense Likes: Adding maybe one thing is nice Dislikes: They make sense Backstory: It seems interesting, I'm not sure if it's finished though. Maybe she malfunctioned and killed her creator because of that, idk just a suggestion ;P
Overall this oc is solid! Good design, solid personality. 8.8/10
