Fullscreen to read the handwriting! Click/space to advance through the slides. This is a quick critique for @LilacOwlet ! She's been improving so fast, it's hard to keep up :0 I had time to crank this out tonight, so I figured I might as well. Hope it helps a bit, and feel free to send more stuff in for me to look at in the future! By the way, I really liked the color palette, so I didn't comment on it -- the only thing I might say is that the base color for the hair is too dark, it makes it look flat. I forgot to comment on why I changed the hair as well - I liked that little bangs/sidesweep thing, but it didn't go with the flowiness of the rest of the hair, so I made all the hair a bit more spiky and angular!
Original: @LilacOwlet Additional sketch by me!
