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Larkfeather rated and drawn!

DODozora•Created September 18, 2020
Larkfeather rated and drawn!
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Design: I like the gray but I think you should change the red to a rusty orange, brown, or gray so it does not look like she's bleeding. I also think you should give her an eye color. :3 Personality: The personality is solid, although I think you should add more Powers: Perfect! thank you for not giving her super neon laser powers or something :D I hate it when ocs have powers that don't fit the universe that their in Weaknesses: The weakness makes sense Likes: The likes make sense Dislikes: The dislikes make sense Backstory: The backstory is solid, nothing like super interesting but that makes sense for a warriors oc. Although adding more to it would be nice!

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Overall this oc is solid! Nothing awful but nothing super interesting either, buts that leaps and bounds better than being bad! 7.8/10

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Project ID426907440
CreatedSeptember 18, 2020
Last ModifiedSeptember 18, 2020
SharedSeptember 18, 2020
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