I really like the design! The colors go well together, the design choices make sense. Overall its good!! The personality seems good The powers are fine too The likes and dislikes make sense, a little more though would be nice but it is not necessary (I can relate to the fandoms thing tbh) The backstory is a little confusing, but I have like smooth brain and the more I read it the more I understand it sooo. It seems really interesting and original too!
Overall, 9/10! Good character with an interesting backstory :3 Jack Stauber is good !!!Remember you do not need take my criticism, you can choose to ignore it if you want!!!!
