HERE WE GOOOOOO Rules: No Being OP And Swearing! No Blood Or Any Dirty stuff! No Ugly/Weird Or Bad Drawing Faces! Sorry, but your part didn't make sense, plus it gets rid of the great evasion part. I still didn't get rid of the characters you brought in... Sorry, it didn't go with what I'd expect with the story. (And plus the crown was hidden farther away)
