Hiya welcome to my first M.A.P.! This is about how Cinderheart finds out she used to be Cinderpelt, and how confused and scared she feels. This is for semi-experienced animators. :) RULES: - 2 parts per person please. :) - If you have a problem with the script, please tell me, I'd be more than happy to change it :) - Please stick to Scratch Guidelines whilst making your part, and be kind to one another. <3 - There will be spoilers for series 1-4. If you haven't read those books, or know whats happened in them, or care strongly about spoilers, I suggest not joining this MAP OR reading the script. - The designs and codeword are inside the project. - Stick to the script please! (I can change it if its to difficult btw.) SCRIPT: Part 1: "Eh-eh-oh-eh-oh, Eh-eh-oh-eh-oh (repeat)" This will be the intro. I might do this part instead, but it's open. I suggest you do parts of Cinderheart's life, I'll add the credits. <3 Part 2: "I was left to my own devices," Show Cinderpaw(heart) in the medicine den, with an awkward leg. At "devices", show Leafpool looking mildly worried. "Many days fell away with nothing to show." Cinderpaw looks to her left, to the entrance to the den, and saw Poppypaw and Honeypaw playing together, and looks grumpy at 'show'. Part 3: @ "And the walls kept tumbling down in the city that we love," Cinderpaw goes to sleep at 'and the walls', and wakes up as Cinderpaw(pelt) on the Thunderpath. She slowly turns around, to see a car coming her way, but immediately wakes up. "Great clouds roll over the hills, bringing darkness from above." As she wakes up, we get a close up of her eyes, and thunderclouds form in them. Tears start to form in her eyes at 'bringing darkness from above', symbolising the rain. At the little drum bit, put a few Cinderpelt memories, like her leg, the badger, etc. to the beat, and when it finishes, please put Cinderpaw's eyes with tears in them. :) Part 4: @ "But if you close your eyes," Cinderpaw goes to sleep at 'but if you', and wakes up in the old Thunderclan Camp, Jaypaw is next to her. "Does it almost feel like nothing changed at all?" Jaypaw lip-syncs this. Cinderpaw looks at him at 'does it almost fell like', but looks down at the camp, her eyes barely moving from side to side. "And if you close your eyes," They start walking around the camp, and Cinderpaw is smiling, recognising her old home as Cinderpelt. "Does it almost feel like you've been here before?" Cinderpaw lip-syncs, when she feels a gust of wind across her face, and looks up to see Cinderpelt's ghost at 'here before?'. "How am I gonna be an optimist about this?" Cinderpaw edges closer towards the ghost, her eyes narrowed. "How am I gonna be an optimist about this?" The ghost disappeared, leaving Cinderpaw looking bewildered, Jaypaw behind her looking normal. Part 5: @ "We were caught up and lost in all of our vices," Cinderpaw is shown being made a warrior, her siblings behind her looking proud, since they were made a warriors before her. "In your (pretend it says 'paws' because, y'know, cats) is the dust," Cinderpelt's ghost is shown sitting by a den, looking at Cinderheart as the meeting breaks up. "Sat all around us." A cat (any cat) walks past the ghost, and it disappeared. The last thing you see is Cinderheart looking confused. Part 6: @ "And the walls kept tumbling down in the city that we love," Cinderheart is in camp, protecting the kits, when she looks up to see the eclipse. "Great clouds roll over the hills bringing darkness from above." At 'great clouds roll', the eclipse is coming together, and for the rest is Cinderheart and all the other cats in camp looking scared. Again, for the drum bit, please put Sol's face, the eclipse, then trees on fire, because she's remembering the Great Fire from series one. Part 7: @ "But if you close your eyes," Cinderheart finds herself in a starry clearing, she starts looking around, frantically. "Does it almost feel like nothing changed at all?" Cinderpelt's ghost appears from the trees, her tail swaying. "And if you close your eyes," Cinderheart edges forward, trembling. "Does it almost feel like you've been here before?" Cinderpelt's ghost shrinks into a dot, and flies up into the sky. "How am I gonna be an optimist about this?" Cinderheart looks confused for a second, until she wakes up, trembling. "How am I gonna be an optimist about this?" She sighs, and curls up again in the warriors den. Part 8: @ "Eh-eh-oh-eh-oh, Eh-eh-oh-eh-oh (repeat)" Show Lionblaze telling Cinderheart about the prophecy, trying to reason with her. Cinderheart shakes her head, dramatically. Lionblaze looks shocked, and sighs. Cinderheart walks away. "Oh, where do we begin?" Cinderheart lip-syncs to Hollyleaf, and she looks like she doesn't care. "The rubble of our sins?" Cinderheart keeps lip-syncing, looking like she was trying to reason with her. "Oh where do we begin?" Hollyleaf looks like an idea came to her, Cinderheart stops lip-syncing. Hollyleaf leaps (continued)
Song: Pompeii by Bastille (awesome singer, go check his songs out <3) I backpacked the song from an EPIC Crowfeather PMV, so go check that out aswell ;) CONTINUED SCRIPT: Part 8 (continued): onto the branch at the gathering. "The rubble of our sins?" Close up to Cinderheart's face, which looks shocked, as if she only just realised what was happening. Part 9: @ "And the walls kept tumbling down in the city that we love," Hollyleaf lip-syncs, looking mad, whilst Firestar is next to her, looking shocked. "Great clouds roll over the hills," Squirrelflight and Leafpool exchanged shocked glances. "Bringing darkness from above." Crowfeather looks like he's growling for 'bringing darkness', and Jayfeather and Lionblaze look shocked for the rest. For the drum bit, please do fire, the face of Ashfur, and Hollyleaf's face looking angry. Part 10: "But if you close your eyes," Show Cinderheart's eyes burst open, then zoom out to find her standing surrounded by Dark Forest cats fighting real and Starclan cats. (No blood please!) "Does it almost feel like nothing changed at all?" She looks to her right, to find Cinderpelt's ghost. She nods, says 'Thank you', but that's inaudible of course, and shrinks into a dot again, and gets absorbed inside Cinderheart. "And if you close your eyes," Show Cinderheart looking shocked, and white light coming from the spot the ghost got absorbed into, but she quickly turns around. "Does it almost feel like nothing changed at all?" She sees Lionblaze being attacked, (remember, no blood!), and runs into help him. "How am I gonna be an optimist about this?" They drive the dark forest cat away, and smile at eachother, before running off the screen to fight more dark forest cats. "How am I gonna be an optimist about this?" Show Cinderpelt's memories (a few piles of herbs, Leafpaw, a badger's face, Yellowfang etc.) and then a few Cinderheart's memories, (the Sky Oak, Lionblaze's face, Jaypaw helping her swim etc.) "If you close your eyes," Show Lionblaze and Cinderheart after the battle sharing prey, and walking down by the lake. "Does it almost feel like you've been here before?" Show Cinderheart talking and laughing with Poppyfrost, and THUMBNAIL CONTEST: For the Thumbnail, make sure to add Cinderheart and Cinderpelt's Ghost maybe Lionblaze, and anything else :) Competitors: @hcps-bittnerel @HelenJA @dragongirl83 FYI, please send me a link to your best animation! Thanks! <3 Part 1: @ripleycmartinez Part 2: @strawberry_sundae FINISHED! Part 3: @Garaa12 Part 4: @CJGamesAndMore Part 5: @dragongirl83 Part 6: @hstarlight Part 7: @-miidniqht- Part 8: @hcps-bittnerel Part 9: @Xx-Brook-xX Part 10: @Le_Spyro_25 Part 11: @Xx-Brook-xX
