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VEVectoriii•Created June 1, 2020
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What do you think please note that this is not the final logotype for Fluent. press [SPACE] to see my version which has adjusted spacing and stuff A very harsh lecture on spacing and text; its all criticism. (dw it's pretty good I just complained about some things I thought looked out of place, don't think of yourself as a bad designer, I notice those things xD) Vectorii: The 'f' looks nice, however it isn't "centered" The spacing between the 'f' and 'l' looks alright, and I get what you wanted to do by filling up the space on the lower part of the 'f,' however, there is still a large space and this looks... odd. Maybe make the 'f' a little skinnier to minimize that space. The 'u' fits fine because it's vertical next to the l. however, the spacing between the 'l' and the 'u' should be the same as the 'f' and the 'l' (I notice these things!). The 'e' is a really cool idea, but the spacing between the 'u' and the 'e' could be reduced ever so slightly because the 'e' being round makes it look smaller. The 'e' also is rounded at the top-right, which is different from the rest of the text which uses square corners. The 't' is also a nice idea, I like this one... however, the space between the 'middle part' of the 't' could be lengthened because there is a small amount of space between the 'n' and the 'middle part.' Uh yeah that was confusing bc idk design terms I'll probably make a quick design with these improvements soon

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Project ID400834333
CreatedJune 1, 2020
Last ModifiedJune 1, 2020
SharedJune 1, 2020
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