Space or Click This is part 1 of the story. Part 2 coming soon.
This took me longer than needed. Blog: https://ask-hands-flame.tumblr.com/ ------------------------------------------------------------------------- What they are saying. Cause, Scratch killed the quality. Up until page two, you don't know what they are saying. Robin: Hey Robin: What's going on here? Dave: Nothing, p*** off. May, silently: My savior. Robin: I don't know, I heard yelling. (And not the friendly kind.) Both May and Dave: ... Dave: Screw this! May: W-Wait! May: Thanks for saving me there. (Dave's a huge pain.) Robin: ... No problem. May: You wanna walk to school with me and Tobi? Robin: (Who's Tobi?) Yeah, alright. And they start walking off, happy. END. (Yeah, I know it's short. I just don't know how to make good dialogue.)