use space to move to next page Story I'm working on tell me if you want the second chapter in the comments if you have an opinion about it please tell me i need to know if its good or needs changes just noticed the word my on the first page is supposed to be me whoops And no the cover I didn't draw it I got it off pinterest
SOMETHING YOU NEED TO KNOW! with this book i did the first chapter as first person(Ex: I, is, am) but after writing the second chapter i realized it didn't sound right to i changed it (Ex:I was, I did,) just letting you all know ************************************************************** main character- Lana Brother- Mica Home planet- Aliban, ruled by a multi government- Ebony Onyx, Petros Digby, Marth Cloven, Nylora Tempest.
