Changes (read the notes and credits after this) -I feel like the player won't have enough time to meet everyone on day 1 so I made it so that time doesn't start to pass until you tell Shellstar you've met everybody (Shellstar will tell you about this in-game) -Added the apprentice den (entrance is by Ferntail and Specklestripe) -Added Bright Drea-I mean Brightpaw, her name is Brightpaw, and no she's defnitley not just Bright Dream from Wolf Spirits turned into a cat -Added Aspenbreeze to the warriors den, he's an anxious boi with a stuttering problem -The variables are now in the bottom left corner because that's where they are least likely to block out dialogue. Eventually I want to make a thing where they only show when you open a character page which gives you information about the character -Jaywhisper's dialogue is changed up a bit, so the player will still know that something weird is going on, but it will be a bit more mysterious -Ferntail's dialogue is also now more cut off. (I want the player to feel like something strange is going on that they don't really know about, but I don't want it to be too obvious) -Changed some backdrop names -Added a thing in the corner that tells you where you are -Jaywhisper's eyes are now green, just to make him a bit less like Jayfeather -Changed Fernsplash's name to Ferntail, mostly because it's weird to have both a Flamesplash and a Fernsplash in the same Clan. (If we end up changing Flamesplash's name, Ferntail will go back to being Fernsplash) -That's all of the changes and additions, I have some ideas and stuff in the notes and credits
IDEAS: So I feel like in order to finish the camp we need : -2-3 more warriors (they don't all have to be in the warriors den, some can be hanging out around camp, also there are a lot of red/orangeish cats, so they should be something like white, silver, gray, black, or something else), one of which will be the deputy. -Just 1 more apprentice, possibly 2 more but I think just 1 more will be fine. -A nursery, probably with just 1 queen and 2-3 kits. -Then there's the elders. I'm not sure if we need them. You see, most warriors games include elders to tell stories so the player can pass time when they're a kit. But in this game the player starts as an apprentice. So maybe we could come up with excuses for why there are no elders? Maybe 1. Elders might be a thing in MysticClan and the other Clans, but not in BraveClan. Maybe in BraveClan a cat just has to keep being a warrior until they die and can never retire. That would say something about BraveClan's nature. Or 2. BraveClan (and maybe the other Clans too) are just too new for there to be any cats old enough to retire. Or if you want, they could have elders, I just personally don't think it's necesary. After we finish the camp we should probably add the MysticClan border and start working on apprenticeship. Okay, and also since you said Wildfeather is from MysticClan, I assume she's probably going to have something to do with the player finding out the truth about where they were born? Oh, and there's been no mention of StarClan or anything yet in the game. So do these Clans have a StarClan or some other religion? Or do they not? I'm thinking maybe the other Clans do have a StarClan or something but maybe BraveClan doesn't care about those things. And lastly, any ideas for a title? I'd rather not call it "Warriors Game". My only good idea so far is "Where Your Loyalties Lie, A Warriors Game", as in like, the player has to decide if they're loyal to BraveClan or MysticClan.
