WHAT I ADDED: A lot of stuff. Look below. -First, I replaced the black arrows with arrows that are the color of the background so that they blend in. Instead of clicking on the arrows, the player has to touch them. I hope that's okay with you. if not, you can add the black arrows back in the next version. -Fallen Ash mentions that he (Fallen Ash is male, right?) has two pups that are about the players age. I have added one of those pups. His name is Cloudy Night (you can change his name and design if you want to) and he's in the wolf hangout (much to Bright Dream's annoyance). I tried to draw him so that it would look the same as the style you used to draw th eother wolves. -On a related note, I have added more dialogue for Bright Dream like you asked. If you keep clicking on her, she will eventually ask you to tell Cloudy Night to leave. This will become your quest. You must click on Cloudy Night and tell him to leave the wolf hang-out. He will refuse, and then you go click on Bright Dream, who will be like, "Okay, at least you tried....thanks." If you click on her again, she will ask if you want to become her "servant". Say no and she will ignore every time you click on her from that point forward. Say yes and you become her servant. So far, becoming her servant doesn't really do anything, except for unlocking a bonus dialogue with Raging Storm. He'll be like, "So you've become the servant to my daughter...That probably wasn't a very good choice." and will give you the option to tell Bright you don’t want to be her servany anymore. (I thought maybe Bright Dream was Raging Storm's daughter because they have similar colors, but you can remove that if you want) Another side affect is that Cloudy Night will be mad at you. -I added some more dialogue with Morning Song and Whisper Moon. Whisper Moon will tell you the story of how he went blind (I assumed he was blind because his eyes are closed and look scratched) if you click on him enough. -I have also changed the word "apprentice" to "trainee" to make this seem less like a Warriors game, but you can change that back if you wish. -After you complete Sandy Fleece's quest and listen to the second poem she wrote about you, she will recite a random poem each time you click on her. (Currently there are only 5 different poems she will recite) -Last but not least, to the left of the meeting cave, there is an outside area outside of the pack den. -I have added another wolf, Silver Claw, who hangs out in the outside area, and she is Fallen Ash's mate (you can change that if you want to), but she doesn't say much, she's kind of just a background decoration. That's it, but I have a few questions in the notes and credits.
Wow, I didn't think I would finish this today, but I did! Credit to @Mirkirith! QUESITONS FOR MIRKIRITH: (You can answer these questions on my profile or your profile or anywhere you want if you don't want other people to see the answers) When we have added all of the wolves and areas that we want to... 1. do you plan for the player to ever become an apprentice/trainee and do training type stuff? 2. Do you plan for there to be a feature where the player can be mates with other wolves and have pups? If so, which wolves would be good future mate options? 3. Do you have any sort of main storyline plans for the game, or is it just a game where you can go on different kinds of quests? If you do plan on having a storyline, here's a suggestion: The game is called Wolf Spirits, but so far it doesn't seem like the pack has any sort of religion or any ancestors or dead wolf spirits that guide them or anything. (Except for when the original game was shared Raging Storm said something about the player being a prophecy wolf, but you removed that) So maybe, the player eventually discovers the Wolf Spirits (who are basically StarClan but with wolves) and gets the pack to believe in them? I don't know.
