Hey! This is the parts I have outlined for Deerleap's Story so far. If you make something for one of these, please feel free to comment down below and link to it! Multiple submissions per part is highly recommended; don't feel scared to do a part someone already did; we'll do a vote later to pick what ends up in the final production. Also, if you do just part of a part, be sure to contact someone who is willing to do the rest and complete your submission. ---- Pre-Intro(before the title intro to the movie); Deerleap is made a warrior: Intro: after she is made a warrior, the words "Deerleap's Story" appear, and dramatic music plays for a bit. Screen fades to black: Part 1: Deerleap and Goldenpelt fall in love: Part 2: Medicine Cat tells Deerleap she is expecting kits, and Deerleap is shocked. Others congratulate her, and Goldenpelt is thrilled, but Deerleap is not too happy: In-between(not necessary to plot, but might further the story): Deerleap suffering the negative effects of being pregnant; no warrior duties, morning sickness, etc.: Part 3: Tunnelkit being born(not actually showing the birth, since that is not scratch appropriate), and Goldenpelt's obvious happiness, as starkly opposed to Deerleap's fear, distaste, and general look of disinterest: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/244349371/ Part 4: Deerleap placing her kit in front of another queen, and leaving to go hunt. Goldenpelt looks on disapprovingly, then confronts her about it, but she just shrugs it off: Part 4.5: Deerleap hunts: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/245191265/ Part 5: Tunnelkit gleefully tries to play with Deerleap, but Deerleap just gets annoyed and stalks off. Tunnelkit is clearly upset, and the happiness slips off his face. (This scene should be fast, and I recommend that multiple(10) people submit, as it should be obvious that Deerleap is ignoring Tunnelkit a LOT of times, not just once. Though, him starting happy should only be the first time, the first should be mildly hopeful/dread-filled): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/244513190/ https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/235497071/ https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/237038943/ Part 5.5: Tunnelkit plays with someone else: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/245190351/ Part 6: Goldenpelt confronts Deerleap again, more forcefully, and this time the confrontation leads to their divorce, since Deerleap does not share Goldenpelt's ideas about kits and parenthood, in fact, she despises being a mother in general. (Side Note- She doesn't hate Tunnelkit, she just hates the responsibility and feels as if she shouldn't have to deal with it all.) Show how everyone is sad with the divorce, (hmmm this reminds me of Crookedstar's Promise for some reason.....) especially Tunnelkit, who starts to feel the effects of Deerleap blaming him, and Deerleap, who, while blaming Tunnelkit externally, actually blames herself. Goldenpelt knows he did the right thing, but is still sad(give this scene the time and devotion it deserves, since this is an important point in the story): Part 7: [What's this? Tunnelkit is evolving!] Tunnelkit's apprentice ceremony. He should be noticeably bigger than the previous scenes. Goldenpelt watching from the front, being the first to start cheering. Deerleap is in the back, not really paying attention as much as Goldenpelt. Tunnelpaw looks over at her, adopts a hurt expression, then averts his eyes. Obviously he still isn't over her rejection of him. When he looks away, Deerleap looks up, a guilty look flashing over her face momentarily as she sees his expression. He opens her mouth to cheer, but it's too late and the moment has passed. Part 8: Tunnelpaw is talking to the other apprentices, and he smiles, for-what? Like, the first time since he was a young kit and his mom didn't play with him for the first time? -anyways, Deerleap walks up, and the other apprentices go quiet. Deerleap tries to apologize, but Tunnelpaw is having none of it. He does NOT accept her apology, he insults her, and so Deerleap slinks away, humiliated. Then, Tunnelpaw's new friends laugh at her, and she hurries away faster, therefore missing Tunnelpaw snapping at them angrily(Note: This scene is welcome to manipulation. Please feel free to have Deerleap apologize in different places, in front of different people. The things that need to stay the same are Tunnelpaw's rejection, the hint he still misses her, it needs to be soon after he becomes an apprentice, and that it cannot be literally in front everyone, or in front of Goldenpelt)(Goldenpelt has been avoiding Deerleap, so a scene with them would be impossible): Part 9: Deerleap running away, out of camp and off through the woods: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/249495778/
Description was too long, so this is continuing what's up there. Quick credits to @Warriors531 for creating this story, and to @Sparkfire302 for having the idea to ask if we could take over once @Warriors531 started devoting their time to other things. @Sparkfire302 no longer works in Deerleap's story, leaving me and @mapleshadeisamazing as the only managers. Also, to everyone reading this, thanks for taking the time to read my tedious monologue of a THANK YOU!!! ---- Part 10: The clan searching for Deerleap(ok maybe Goldenpelt can lead the search or something idk), and Tunnelpaw is VERY upset, and he clearly blames himself. Tunnelpaw, while searching for Deerleap half-heartedly, finds a scent trail, and a tuft of her fur. He smell it, grief crossing his expression, then he clearly decides he didn't want to see her again, and he rubs against the tree, leaving his fur behind to mask Deerleap's scent. Then, after a moment of hesitation, he takes her tuft of fur and runs back to camp, away from the search party. Part 11: Tunnelpaw is learning warrior skills from his mentor. (He can be learning whatever, but I'd appreciate multiple submissions for this part, since he should be learning all sorts of different things): Part 12: Tunnelpaw passes his assessment and retires to the apprentice den for a well-earned nap. But he brushes up against the tuft of Deerleap's fur, which he still has in his nest. Tears pool in Tunnelpaw's eyes as he proceeds to throw out the tuft of fur, looking murderous and guilty: Part 13: Tunnelpaw gets named Tunnelclaw, and he searches the audience for Deerleap, only to remember she ran away back when he was an apprentice. He looks sad as the clan cheers: Part 14: Tunnelclaw rushes through the woods, trying to find Deerleap, running in the direction he had found her fur in originally. He searches and searches, eventually coming upon a clearing. Shock fills his face: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/245281293/ Part 15: Tunnelclaw sees Deerleap, dead, and he sees a fox standing over her. Tunnelclaw's shocked expression turns to one of rage. He leaps forwards and attacks the fox(Try to make the blood minimal): Part 16: Continuation of the fox fight, Tunnelclaw beat the fox, but right when he's about to kill it, he changes his mind and lets it get away. Tunnelclaw turns back to his mother, grieves(Again, keep blood at a minimum): Part 17: Tunnelclaw returning to camp, and telling Goldenpelt what happened. Goldenpelt, originally angry at Tunnelclaw's disappearance, suddenly looks sad: Part 18: Tunnelclaw falls asleep. He wakes up in StarClan, but there aren't any cats, and he doesn't know it. He walks around confused at first, then he sees his mother, equally lost. Deerleap sees him and runs over. Deerleap explains that she can't find the way to StarClan, and she apologizes again. This time, however, Tunnelclaw forgives her, and he apologizes as well: Part 19: Tunnelclaw starts fading, waking up, and Deerleap panics. But Tunnelclaw assures her that it's fine, and she will see him again soon enough. Tunnelclaw disappears. Deerleap turns and runs up the trail, trying to find StarClan. She comes upon a clearing filled with StarClan cats. They look up at her. "Welcome to StarClan," A StarClan cat says. Deerleap looks happy: Part 20: The credits. Don't do this part until all the other parts are done. Ok. You've read it all. Now go do some stuff :D Parts I don't know where to put(Please advise!): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/244333995/ https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/237103117/ Music: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/252685563/
