I tried a different way of doing a critique I hope you like it! (click your character to see changes): 1) For the head, I removed the outline so it looks better 2) For the neck, I used a rectangle and I made it a darker shade 3) I made the hair it bit less messy, so I used a circle for the hairline I used a circle and reshaped it and for the back hair guess what I did.. used a circle guess what I did with it... reshaped it 4) The eyes I used a circle and another two circles and made it smaller, a black one for the pupil and a pink circle for...idk 5) For the lipstick, I made it a bit less messy 6) I changed the hair bow into something more that looks like one (not to be rude) 7) For the dress, I used a circle and I reshaped it so it looks more like a dress Please don't take the character in this project, make it yourself
