For @-fate ! Original is by @-fate Space for my re-drawing!
@-fate - original art So, the lineart is actually very similar to what it was before! I did move the jawline and cheek slightly. The main change in shape is the hair, the lines do not come to meet each other as much, so it suggests a thicker shape. In terms of colors, I eyedropped the originals and saturated them a bit more / darkened them. I also added a color to the background that would complement them slightly. Not all the shading is perfect on mine either, but I tried to add it to a greater area to give the drawing more depth! Other things changed were thickening the lines, moving the eyebrows slightly, changing the nose shape slightly, making the shoulders more broad and adding clothing, and adding a pout to the lip as well as lipstick. Hope it helped!
