so heres my entry, terrible. this is melchony (credit to nico for name) she was never happy. her heart seemed too shrink. her brother tank couldn't stand her. he hated her! he fought her when mother and father wern't around! he threatened "if you slip away what has happen i'll rip your pelt off and sleep on it!" and melchony belived him. she stayed far away from him, then one day he encountered a fox! it attacked his mother and fineshed her! melchony watched as her brother was pinned ina hollow. but insted of helping she turned and closed her eys as she heard the fox snap its jaws around her brother! then somthing happened that day, her heart ripped in half! go here! http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/midnight321/2687468
