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(Added by @1553224 . Love the song, btw U3U) Name: Alexandra "Alex" Nicole Olivers Age: 15 Gender: Female Height: 5'7" Sexuality: Lesbian Relationship Status: she has a girlfriend Powers(if any): umm... she has wings so i she can fly Skills: arts, fangirling, being awkward gYmNaStIcS Negative Traits: shy, not very balanced (like physically), kinda a doormat, tends to have a short temper she's stubborn on the flip side she likes to get up in everyones faces half the time like she has 2 personalities Personality: creative, bold in her own shy way if that makes sense, self aware Disabilities(if any):urm.. not any that i can think of... i have chars w/ disabilities tho Backstory: welp... it's kinda long and has never been wrote down, but... umm... she um got into harry potter when she was 9, she recently got into hamilton, close friends with jenny and cathy, always been extremly close with her identical twin sister, Charlotte. she is friends with matthew, and jason (jason is her girlfriend's brother, her name is julia) she umm... figured out that she was gay when she over a few weeks developed a crush on julia. she stared at her a lot, and became a lot more self aware. she noticed that julia stared back, and one day she told julia her feelings for her. they got together, but charlotte and jason kinda dont get along. her sister overheard her, and she helped her come out to her parents, who were fine with it. she started expressing her pride a lot publicly, and eventually julia and alex got close enough to have their first kiss. (i have a pic of that on my other account, @firespectrum in an art dump) so umm.. yeah... her mom is a wolf named bella, her dad is a human named nikolas, she has a younger sister named olivia. also she recently went ice skating, and she's not very good at it. (neither is cathy tho) yeah umm... i have so many things i could say but i cant fit them all, and she is also self conscious of her wings btw... (oh yeah and she likes taylor swift)
Positive Aspects Not a lot of time I’d let someone get away with /just/ a bunch of greys for a characters color scheme, but I think you did this very well with Alex. I like that her backstory is long and detailed, and contains a lot of thought and care. I can tell she’s your sona, and I like how you did more than just making yourself into a werewolf, you kinda took your own life story and spiced it up enough to make a well-rounded character. I loved that there was a middle name, not a lot of content creators have middle names sorted out. It’s very cute that she’s self-conscious about her wings, too <3 Negative Aspects I /do/ like the lengthy, detail-oriented backstory but I think you should work on condensing the details, one Scratch comment long(500 characters) is usually a good rule of thumb for the length of a backstory summarization. I believe her outfit is a little bland, too. All OC outfits don’t need to be crazy cool and super inventive, but I think that adding some design or something instead of just a plain grey shirt would add a lot of character to her, and make her a lot more visually pleasing.
