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Lacuna [Rating And Review]

FLFloofyBrightBab•Created April 24, 2018
Lacuna [Rating And Review]
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(Added by @FantasyGalaxy485 ) Bio Name:Lacuna Age:14 Gender:Female Height:5"8 Sexuality:Male Relationship Status:Single Powers(if any):To drain powers from enemies and use them as her own (This is why her name is Lacuna. Lacuna is Italian for empty.) Skills:Art; singing Negative Traits: Lacuna can get very aggressive and unfriendly sometimes, to the point where she is dangerous Personality:Usually friendly; talkative Disabilities(if any):None Backstory:She was an elf princess, but later her family abandoned her. Then someone took her in, and she was raised as a human. She had to keep the fact that she was an elf princess secret.

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Positive Aspects She has a very nice color pallet, and I like her hair a lot. I think that the pale skin and light hair go well together, and her dark, https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/216259850/contrasting eyes were a great design choice. I like the simpleness of her backstory, even if it could’ve been a bit more fleshed out. I also liked the contrasting, realistic personality trains. When angry she’ rude, mean, more violent, and less friendly, contrasting her normal friendly and talkative personality which is very relatable and adds a realistic touch to her. I also love that her name is “empty” in Italy. Negative Aspects While her backstory was good and simple, I feel like it could be boosted a lot with a few more details. Why did her parents get rid of her, who took her in, why did they do so, what kind of universe does she live in, build the world around your character more and her story will be much more immersive, and can be huge despite being simple. I also default take off points for the “male” sexuality, which would actually be heterosexual. I also would like to know if her powers are infinite or not, can she take unlimited powers or is there a stopping point that prevents her from becoming OP(over powered)?

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Project ID218473065
CreatedApril 24, 2018
Last ModifiedApril 25, 2018
SharedApril 24, 2018
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