(Added by @Monkeely ) Bio(fill this out so I can rate it!) Name: Blazira Age: 14 Gender: Girl Height: Oh, she's around 4 foot 7. Something like that! Sexuality: Pansexual Relationship Status: Single Powers(if any): She is a Scientist in training. She studies the Sun. She's really obsessed with the Sun. To get to the point, she can control when the sun sets and rises. Skills: Controlling the Sun. Negative Traits: When she gets mad at someone she will destroy a science expiriment. Personality: Nice, but very destructive. Disabilities(if any): None, really. Backstory: When she was 5, her Father was sent to NASA to study Space. On the Night that he came Home, there was a Heatwave. She didn't know, so she ran out there. Her Parents didn't know. She was out there for 3 minutes before she fell down. The next Morning someone found her on their Front Yard, and she was sent to the Emergency Room. She was very Lucky to Live through it. After that she started obsessing over the Sun, and all that led her to a Dark Cave made of Sun Rock. When she touched one she got her Power.
Positive Aspects I like the fact that she’s an accurate 14 year old OC. A lot of the time you see OCs that are 15 or under having sue-ish powers/skills/personalities, but I think you handled something really over powered, like controlling the sun, pretty well. I like that her hairs ombre has red on the left and orange on the right, with her eyes being orange on the left and red on the right; the swap is visually very pleasing. I also appreciate the subtly of the color pallet, having her hair, eyes, and shirt all be orange/red, colors associated with the sun. Along the lines of color, I like how all her colors are warm colors, as to also fit with the theme of the sun. I think her negative trait practically being that she sometimes throws fits and breaks stuff is very childish, though appropriate; she is practically a child, after all. Finally, I like how instead of going the easy route of “she woke up with powers the end” she has a legitimate, original story behind how she got her powers. Negative Aspects I never really like default Scratch color pallet colors, as they are easily recognizable as default and honestly limit what you can do with a character. Although I liked the creativity of her backstory, I think that further elaboration would make her story a whole lot more coherent. For example, what are Sun Rocks? Would ANYBODY gain powers from just touching the Sun Rocks, or is she special in some way? If so, how and why is she special? I think that a more fleshed-out backstory is in order.