![Sukram [Rating And Review]](https://cdn2.scratch.mit.edu/get_image/project/216266469_480x360.png)
(Added by @Jaywalker_ ) Bio: This isn't very thorough, more thorough on my toyhouse (link in notes) Name: Sukram Age: robot. Couple hundred years. Gender: robot. Identifies as male. Height: Around 2 feet. Sexuality: robots don't dAte Relationship Status: robots don't dAte Powers: n O ne Skills: Doctor, along with some other random things like being able to repair other robots Negative Traits: Generally negative towards others, mainly because he was programmed to finish things quickly and sufficiently. Personality: just look at the toyhouse its more thorough there Disabilities: Again, impatient and low attention span. he can choose to pay attention for longer but only if its really important. Although it isn't a disability, his screen sort of glitched causing his mouth to appear above his eyes. Backstory: I'm re-doing it but for the most part he was made for the planet deprived of resources to help out with the operation. Multiple robots were made for this, he being one of the few. Once the transfer of New Worlds happened (long story short every organic lifeform on the planet died, including his creators) he was lonely and had nothing to do. Years of isolation caused him to break through his programming and come out with a real sort of personality, which is pretty much the same as his original, but he can control himself better. He's still stranded out in space and is constantly trying to get into New Worlds (which is the thing that killed everyone, sort of like a virtual reality thing except your mind gets uploaded I guess and you cant really get out)
Positive Aspects I really like his colors and/or lack of, they’re very nice and blend well together. I think making him mainly grey was a good choice, first of all because it makes sense for metal to be grey and secondly it’s very aesthetically pleasing to see plain greys with just a splash of blue where it(character-wise) makes sense. I like the ears shape/design, as well. On top of this, I thought the face being re-arranged was a cute little quirk for him to have. In the realm of character development and story, I think he’s got a pretty well built universe set up, and his backstory is simple to understand, though it gives you so much information. I like that there is a fair balance of positive and negative traits, and overall just really enjoy this character. Negative Aspects I do think that there are a few things that could be improved upon. For starters, I personally don’t like the floof on the side of his head. Is it metal, faux fur, real fur, what’s the deal with the robo-fuzz? Secondly, it seems like his large claws would get in the way pf doctor-ing. I feel like one “power” or skill could be that he can retract his claws to be able to do doctor stuff, or that that was the purpose for it before everything was killed. Other than that, my only real complaint would be the unanswered question of his name origin. So, in short, I loved the color pallet, originality, attention to details and cute small quirks. On the other hand, I think that a few small design/story adjustments could raise the bar a whole lot; like, having the claws retractable, since they seem like they would get in the way of doctor work, explaining where and how he got his name, and either explaining or removing robo-fluff.
