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Alexander [Rating And Review]

FLFloofyBrightBab•Created April 11, 2018
Alexander [Rating And Review]
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~Bio~ Name: Alexander(last name unknown, but isn't actually Hamilton) Age: 23 Gender: Cisgender male Height: 5'11 Sexuality: Homosexual Relationship Status: Taken Powers(if any): Can create ice, can 'freeze' holes in space-time. But only if he has his crystal necklace Skills: Good at fencing, partially immune to the cold Negative Traits: Cowardice, can be short-tempered at times(rarely) Personality: A little sassy, gets scared easily, extremely loyal despite that Disabilities(if any): PTSD Backstory: His parents were colonists before the American revolutionary war, they returned to England eighteen years before the war started. Alexander was born shortly after that. He traveled to the colonies when he turned 18 because he wanted to explore the world, he didn't know about the war. A few months later he reluctantly became a soldier so he could protect his friends. During his first(and only) battle he panicked and tried to run away from it, he was knocked to the ground by an enemy solder in an attempt to kill him. Alex accidentally made a portal to England 2018, where he met his future husband. //whee I'm too lazy to write everything else

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I think Alexander has a really nice design, though I can point out a few flaws. First off, how does he get by in 2018 without suspicion? Wearing full, completely accurate revolutionary war-time clothing would be pretty strange. Second off, how did he make the portal? Did he randomly gain the power right when he made it, or did he always have powers and accidentally used them when he did? Another thing that’s confusing me is the fact that he’s good at fencing. After going through war and having PTSD, wouldn’t you want to avoid any battle-like situations(aka a sparring match). I really liked his outfit, though; it’s good for what it it(early american/revolutionary war getup). I really like the gears in the hat, it’s a small detail that really took a regular black hat and made it a nice accessory that adds to the character. I like the realistic simplicity of his design, as well. The colors are realistic for a rev. war soldiers outfit. His color scheme is put together well and you really did a lot with just a handful of colors.

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Project ID215334001
CreatedApril 11, 2018
Last ModifiedApril 13, 2018
SharedApril 11, 2018
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