Notes: (I'm really sorry if I sound rude, I'm really not trying to) Here are my thoughts on the RPG so far.... -Spellcheck! Right away, I notice lots of spelling and grammar issues. -You may want to take a look at the reality of things, not to sound rude of course... If you truly want to call this a Warriors RPG, then you may want to reconsider the monkeys, fish, and dogs as pets, since both in the books and in real life, this is unrealistic- same with these 'superpowers'. Also, in the books, they wouldn't capitalize both words in a cat's name, only the first one (i.e., Amberstar) -I do like that you have maps, though I think it's a bit odd that CanineClan built their camp at the end of a ThunderPath -In future RPGs, you may want to add two things to your bio template- One, a template to draw the cat off of- it makes it sooooo easy to be sooo lazy! xD Just get one off Google, with credit of course. Also, it's good to have a place to show any backstory, personality traits, or interesting details about your cat. -At this point, the RPG doesn't really have a name. Credits to gecko998
