So (in my opinion) EOOATS had a bit of a pacing/plot timeline issue. There's too little time between the revival of Arie and the big fight, and zero buildup to Poppy Sis saving Shy Gal & Die Guy (although that was a last-minute addition). I want to make sure that doesn’t carry on to TCU. Another problem is that I want to make the parallel to ep19 but according to the pattern we have going on in TCU, ExOnOe will have it. I know we don’t have to follow the pattern, but my fix for this problem would also help fix the pacing problem. So my idea: Merge eps 16, 17 and 18 together and TCU ep16 the parallel to those, as those 3 eps were very short. Then in the new ep 19 or 20 or 21 (depends on who wants to code this part) Laviron is revived, but the heroes don’t know. Then the heroes go to the hotel, sleep, then Plazma commits arson. When the heroes leave they could fight Plazma and learn that he was sent by Die Guy. Once they leave the desert, Dawn and Toadette escape and reveal that Laviron has been revived, and the next chunk of the series could be the heroes either heading to the castle or learning how to break the curse, with Poppy Sis with them. This part of the series allows for a buildup to the part where the curse is broken, maybe the reveal of the Crystal Blade’s sentience, and lets the audience and maybe heroes know Die Guy as (kinda) opposite of ExOnOe, Shy Gal as opposite of Boomer Guy and Laviron as opposite of Boggy. Then when the heroes are at the castle gates they fight the Agony Consumers, break the curse, and then storm the castle and we wrap up the series however we do it. As this is a collab, my idea is a suggestion and you boys can change it if you’d like.
