Dogs_andCatsRule//I would like to be a writer because overall I just really enjoy it, and EA is my favorite comic on scratch.//Well, I’m currently writing a warriors fanfic offsite, and I have had to write scripts for my classes at school.// Imma rewrite chapter 83, just scripted. Show a sweeping landscape of stars, the sun rising in the sky. Linger on the sunrise for a few more seconds, then sweep downwards. Move the camera to show the inside of the apprentices den, and zoom in on sleeping Adderpaw. Show her open her eyes once and then stand up. Zoom the camera out, and show her yawning, arching her back in a stretch. Cherrypaw is curled up in the shadows of the den, and Adders eyes flicker to him before she trots out of the den. Make the screen black for a few seconds as though the camera is covered by the den, then show a zoom in of Adder picking up a piece of prey from the pile. Then zoom out and show her disappearing into the elders den, dropping a piece of prey between the elders. She talks to one of them for a few seconds, then walks out of the elders den. Do a close up of her eyes narrowing. Then show her walking over to the two fighting cats. Adder disappears from the screen, and leaps from the side. Show her squishing the left arguing cat. The frame zooms out slightly as Adder gets off the cats and holds out prey to both of them. The right cat grins, while the left cat looks unhappy. The screen goes black. Then show Palepetal,Spidertooth, and Squirrelear in the right hand corner, sitting in a circle, chatting. Show Adders head slowly coming up from the right hand corner, and she starts talking. ADDERPAW:Palepetal, Spidertooth, Squirrelear, your turn on dawn patrol. The three cats look confused for a couple of seconds, and Squirrelear starts to talk. SQUIRRELEAR: Isn’t the deputy supposed to organize patrols? Change the view of the camera to show a full body shot of Adderpaw sitting. Show her eyes slightly widening. ADDERPAW:Could you tell us where our deputy is then? I would gladly pass the message. Sweep the view across the camp, and show no cats in sight. Flick the view back to show the three cats. Slightly zoom in on squirrelears face, and she says, SQUIRRELEAR:…Ah A look of understanding forms on her face. Then change the camera to Spidertooth. SPIDERTOOTH: Should we hunt along the way? Zoom the camera out and flip it back to Adderpaw. ADDERPAW:Only if you see any easy prey. Show Adderpaw lick her paw and draw it across her ear, slowly blinking as though she is thinking. ADDERPAW:I will send out a full patrol later. Maybe Cherrypaw will go hunting with me. Show her glance off to the side, in the direction of the apprentices den. Change the view to a spider tooth slight close up. SPIDERTOOTH:Good luck. He hasn’t moved all moon. You might as well be asking a rock to go hunting. Show a fullbody of Adderpaw standing up and flicking her tail. ADDERPAW:Thanks. Make the screen all black, and show something like the end or next episode coming soon, or smth. I changed some of the speech in case you didn’t notice, lol.
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