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Narrative Writing — Penitence

-S-Snowfall_•Created November 22, 2024
Narrative Writing — Penitence
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View here as well: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1137845552 Yippieeeeee I finished my narrative writing :) I recommend to zoom in, because it’s hard to see the text for some reason Anyways, this story is called Penitence. You’ll get why I named it why after you read the book :) I made this because my ELA class is learning about central idea, and we had to write a SHORT narrative that will show but not explicitly state the central idea. The amount of pages stated in the assessment was 2 pages long, but I made it 4 pages lol The main character is Aleksander Broz, and it’s a World War II narrative (y’all know I love ww2) so yeah Part of our grade is if the majority of people who read the narrative could guess the central idea correctly, so I guess you can put in the comments what you think the central idea is so I can get an idea of what grade I’m going to get. Here’s a basic summary of central idea if you don’t know what it is: central idea is an abstract noun, like the words acceptance, bravery, grief (plus more) showing what the story is showing you. Like the story 3 Little Pigs, the central idea is preparation. The first two pigs don’t build a safe enough house from the wolves, but the third one plans ahead and builds a house made to survive anything. A central idea should be displayed throughout the whole story. Hope this helps! If you don’ get it, as your teacher or parent/guardian, or just look on Scratch! Yeah lol well this story is a bit confusing in some places, so just ask me if you need clarification! There are some parts that may be confusing if you don’t follow Judaism (or if you are not Christian, my teacher is and she says she knows through her trips to church). Adonai is what I believe the prayer name of the god Yahweh, the creator of the world. Yahweh is also known as YHWH. The Messiah is a savior who takes good souls back to their bodies. There are different ideas of heaven in Judaism, and the Messiah is one of them. Hope this clears a few things up! Did I work too hard on this? I just want a good grade lol Holy cheese balls those two explanations were long A’ight well goodbye

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Edit 1.17.25: ok uh I changed the Central Idea so ^^ also I did get a pretty good grade!

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Project ID1100890448
CreatedNovember 22, 2024
Last ModifiedFebruary 23, 2025
SharedNovember 22, 2024
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