This is for @yannasunset for her critique on her story! Oh my gosh! It’s so hard to criticize it but here we go. I really like the overall story and the sort of small story line to this. It really makes the story go into depth with the meaning of revenge and redemption. I also like how it was first person so we can see and understand the speaker's thoughts and motives described in the short story. The inclusion of different fantasy or fiction characters such as dragons really help bring a different twist into it. I would like to understand the characters personality more and name as well. (If that makes sense of course) I know it was a short story for a larger plot for something, but I feel like that will bring more entertainment to the story. Overall, I really loved the story and will look for more later!!
